A small story about sharing seeds becomes a lesson in main ideas, evidence, and the limits of inference.
Original fictional passage
On Monday, the library table held a tray of unmarked envelopes. By Wednesday, someone had placed a handwritten sign beside them: SEEDS TO SHARE. Lina picked up an envelope, felt the small shapes inside, and put it down again. “How will anyone know what to plant?” she asked.
One envelope will remain unidentified at the end. The unanswered question matters as much as the labels the characters add.
Revision improves meaning, structure, and evidence; proofreading checks conventions.
Read the worked case
Read the passage, then test the inference
On Monday, the library table held a tray of unmarked envelopes. By Wednesday, someone had placed a handwritten sign beside them: SEEDS TO SHARE. Lina picked up an envelope, felt the small shapes inside, and put it down again. “How will anyone know what to plant?” she asked.